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[[WIP] Psychopath Bunny]

I'm not one for rap, but all I can say is this pretty much has potential for an MV.

Free2Play responds:

Lol well thank you, I'm actually not a fan of rap either lol. It was only recently someone showed me real hip hop like Nujabes and I started taking a lot of influence.

[DarkForce - Swedish dance]

Nice melody and transitioning, but, it was kinda repetitive... It didn't seem that repetitive though, due to the occasional "Yeaahoo!" at times 0:33, 1:01, 2:07 & 3:07. However, that led me to find the "Yeaahoo!"s overused...

Well, then there's the thing about how "hard" your song is... The definition here is pretty vague, but I'll just take it to be "intense" like most songs are when described as "hard"... Hope that's what you meant too.
So, you kinda mixed in a little "trancey" stuff here and there beween the "dancey" and "technoey" bits, but you kinda transitioned too fast between them, or something, 'cause I didn't feel that it was that hard, for both the "technoey", "dancey" stuff and "trancey" stuff...

For the trancey relaxing end, you kinda just ended it to fast for me... But it should seem alright to others.
In an analogy, it's like, having a guy listening to some relaxing trancey songs when he sleeps, and he's kinda like drifting slowly into sleep, which is what most of the stuff I listen to have that little slow-dying-out ending.
Then again, it's just my opinion that it's too fast to end, others mightn't find it so.

Overall, your has a melody that wasn't that repetitive, but I find it needs a tad more variation.. I like the smooth transitioning, pretty neat. I don't think that the track was hard though.
I also don't know if I'm bullcraping here, since I don't know much about music. Or the terms.

RasmusiBoy responds:

Hey, thank you for that long review! It really helps me for my upcoming tracks. Thanks again =)

[A DJ's Chorus - SG]

Hmma...

PhinnyCupcakes dude does have a point, despite putting it in with profanities...

I guess a better way to put it is that, try to experiment a little? You could never go wrong with music.

Ahh, I might be just bullshiting. Oh well, your music is good. It is awesome. I guess somebody's just not liking that you "reuse"..? some patterns.

Don't stop making music, or I might die one day. Maybe. However, let's make it greater, EXPERIMENT~ ^0^

Well, you can just treat this comment like bullshit, because I seriously have no idea what I'm posting about.

SKILLZmakeKILLZ responds:

im am NOT reusing patterns lets get that straight.

second ok ill experiment ... but dont complain if it sounds like shit, because i really dont know how to make good music from chords that sound different than the ones i use because they tend to sound less happy than i want in my style. i need to be inspired to make music, cant just begin experimenting .

not going off on you or anything, i will try, ty for your review <3

[Face- Demostep]

Whoa

I did not see the Demoman coming. LOL I thought Demostep meant Demo Dubstep, not Demoman Dubstep. XD

FKProductions responds:

Hahah, gotcha! Thanks for the review ^ -^

[Fallen Heros]

Like a Funeral.

No, not an insult, but you've made sad and simple song make me simply sad. :(
Which is good. :D

Sounds like something I'd play on a funeral, cause of the sadness it enduces...
Great piece of sad music.

Enzer0 responds:

i like sad music :)

[Bishops Finger (Dubstep W.I.P)]

._. Lol.

Hmm why don't you do both? :D

Cause, from what I'm listening, you should make a full song of to "bring out the song's full potential" (or something, am I talking crap?), but from what I listen now, it ain't having much of that "potential" crap I'm talkin'.

So, kinda complete the song first, scrap it if it sounds crap, or submit it and do another one? Kinda my suggestion.
:/
Well, if you're not a lazy dude.

yeajimmiboi responds:

Haha, not a lazy dude, just a big stoner haha. Plus it is 3 in the morning here so I'll leave it till the morning man. Thanks for your input! I'll make a full track and submit it.